Naomi, your work is OK but there are some issues that you'd need to attend to during your music magazine project: a) establish EXACTLY what is meant by 'language' in LIAAR, you clearly don't understand it. b) don't moan about having 'limited time' in your evaluation. Other students managed to produce excellent work given the same ammount of time. c) Always do more than the BARE MINIMUM i.e. your contents page could have been far more developed. Not terrible, but not great either. Work consistently on your next project to secure a higher grade.
Naomi, your work is OK but there are some issues that you'd need to attend to during your music magazine project:
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b) don't moan about having 'limited time' in your evaluation. Other students managed to produce excellent work given the same ammount of time.
c) Always do more than the BARE MINIMUM i.e. your contents page could have been far more developed.
Not terrible, but not great either. Work consistently on your next project to secure a higher grade.